Curves - Does it work?
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Djenkins
Registered: Dec 29, 2004
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Good Afternoon All,

I have a goal this year of developing a portfolio of images since I started shooting (only a couple of years). As part of the process I am reviewing through older images, and find things that may have been overlooked before.

I would be interested in any thoughts on the below image (either version)...I have thick skin, so if it needs to be sent back to the trench so be it...

Thanks for your time...



bshamilton
Registered: Aug 28, 2005
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Don't send anywhere but to the printer!
I prefer the warmer tones of the 1st, by a small bit. Terrific, almost sensuous curves!!

Barry



MartinMcl
Registered: Mar 23, 2005
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Love both of these, Derek; lovely textures, colours - and curves.



PierreB
Registered: Feb 23, 2005
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Definitely not back to the trench for these. The light in the first one is great.

Pierre.



Djenkins
Registered: Dec 29, 2004
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Barry / Martin / Pierre ~ Thank you all for the wonderful comments - I'm a little surprised I overlooked this one :-)



SEJohnson83
Registered: Mar 11, 2008
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going to have to agree with everyone here... the first image with the warm light and tone is a great piece of art



Jeffrey
Registered: Nov 12, 2002
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They both are the same image?



Djenkins
Registered: Dec 29, 2004
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Thanks SEJohnson83 - I appreciate the feedback and compliment.

Jeffrey - Yes, they are the same image. Only difference is the second image has a "dreamy" action I found on the web a while ago...When I applied the action, I wasn't sure if it worked, as I like the others like the warmth of the first - But yet there was something about the tonality of the second.



stanj
Registered: Aug 05, 2003
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First one, by a big margin.



Cliftonyte
Registered: Jan 28, 2004
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I like the first one. My first look gave me a thought of an intrigue brush stroke, very cool
image!!!



Sunny Sra
Registered: Sep 16, 2002
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The first one is cool...print it big.



Tim_Raschko
Registered: Dec 13, 2005
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Something in between might be interesting



aFeinPhoto.com
Registered: Mar 15, 2006
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Both are great. Not sure I can pick. Might be a good dyglph...or the word for side by side...anyway. Very awesome.

aF



floris
Registered: May 11, 2006
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I'm a fan of colors, so the first one will get my vote. But I can see the interest in #2. #1 just has a feel of molten lava somehow, rising up, it looks very alive. Very nice composition, well seen.



JimFox
Registered: Jan 11, 2005
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Hey Derek,

I like the first one a lot. The angle of the shot is interesting though, I can feel myself falling off it... I do think that adds to the abstract quality of it.

Jim



Djenkins
Registered: Dec 29, 2004
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stanj / Cliftonyte / Sunny / Tim / AF / Floris / Jim ~ Thank you all for your comments - I appreciate the input.



rhazleh
Registered: Mar 29, 2008
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#1 is fantastic. Definately a keeper.



David Leask
Registered: Nov 19, 2003
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#1 all the way for me Derek - top shot!
David



Djenkins
Registered: Dec 29, 2004
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Country: United States

rhazleh & David, Thanks for the feedback...



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